There’s enough room around Cheyenne, Wyoming, to see the son of G_D come down, and as he falls, he drops with speed, and I see under this silent moon, with somewhat of a relief, that this particular I Am is me! Indeed, yes, as my Pappy bequeathed to me, in a childhood brief dream, “you are a witness of the lightning that is in me, a purer form of the great gospel, that the spirit has been released”. He said, “you and I make two, I is no longer a solo treatise”. So here it is on the high plains of Wyoming, I believe in what is non-belief, and as, I love the walls fall down with a violent release.
Interned in the scape that is my reason, the commitment, that is thought out like a barrister’s brief, comes my daddy’s words in the legend, that defines my belief. He said, “Deuteronomy is your creed, for you’re the head that drags the tail”. Could be true daddy but sometimes that tail breaks down walls, those fortresses inside of us all. And yes, I smell relief, like a beautiful spirit inhabiting me, and outside of Cheyenne near 25, speaks the long lonesome prairie as if it cried, and bled in seed, and it comes up rolling inside of me. “Won’t you be a man, be a man spirit begs me”. Then the walls fall down and I’m free.
I’m a witness, yes a falling fire decidedly, woven into the fabric of Wyoming, could be a ghost I might be. And I fall with the daemons, like the risen, bastardly, and what is the letter of G_Ds compassion breaks every damn weakness inside of me, and the walls come down.
My son tells me, he’s not a Christian, I say, “bless you now, and bless you forever, for these are the words inscribed in what is we”. “Right here outside of Cheyenne as your falling with me”. “Deuteronomy is your creed, for you’re the head that drags the tail”. He smiles and the passion is unspoken, and his love breaths wonderful belief. I say, “you are a witness of the lighting that is in me, a purer form of the great gospel, that the spirit has been released”. I said, “you and I make two, I is no longer a solo treatise”. I say it loud then as I am falling, the walls have come down. The walls are falling down.
There’s enough room around Cheyenne, Wyoming, to see the son of G_D come down! – 06.01.2016 – דָּנִיֵּאל
Many thanks to the wonderful music of JR Richards, for the inspiration.
A masterpiece!
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Wow, thank you. That is a big build of confidence, not sure if I deserve it, but will take it. 😉
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It was a fantastic piece of work, and yes, go ahead and take a bow! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Once again I am blown away by your words. Love this.
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Thank you Heather, I am happy you liked it. Have a great day…
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Thank you, you have a wonderful day as well.
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There is a miracle here in your words and your rhyme. What a beautiful magical weave you have written.
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Thank you so much Donna for your kind compliment and for reading what I have written.
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Anytime, you really should look into being published.
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This is fantastic!
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Thank you Daria.
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❤
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🙂
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Daniel your writing is so filled with surrealism and teachings at the same time. I am fascinated by it.
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Thank you,I really sometimes am not sure, it’s a hobby, I throw stuff out there, and am genuinely happy when people respond and like it. 🙂
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🙂
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You have written a great passage about the wonders that can happen when Father’s and sons breakdown the generational walls between them. Well done.
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Thank you for a wonderful comment. I could not agree more with what you have said.
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Your words here portrayed such victory, and the music you chose was beautiful, quite fitting.
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Thank you.
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This was a great read!
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Fantastic, I am really happy you liked it. 🙂
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Your work is spectacular, I look forward to each time you post.
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Again thank you!
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This is now my new favorite Daniel, your words and rhythm are magical!
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Thank you sir!
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Beautiful, Daniel. Truly beautiful.
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Thank you Jen! That means alot to me! 🙂
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Very nice work.
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Thank you very much!
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No problem. My own blog is Christian blog, so I love going around wordpress and viewing other Christian blogs, as there is some great and very nice stuff.
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