It waits so patient, some say so strong, it’s beauty a part of the terror of a song. A melody sung to a right minor key, sometimes hummed backwards, now those novice notes wait inward in me. Oh upwards G minor, and down to B flat, and somewhere a violin, without strings, well, there’s that. And just like at Salem, a witch that knows she’s dead, all I have to say to G_D is “I’m innocent of all that”.
Outside this door. At fifty-five, bored, I’m not fond of counting, that shadow waits for more, and in disguise that shade of gray that has death on its tongue, you see it’s a little secret, darkness, has no sex. That non feeling matter, that thought has assigned, that angel or devil, that Daemon divined. That secret of carrion, no respecter that comes when your dark shadows, play with you, while you drink some cheap rum. Time when fairness leaves you and Facebook is not real. You stand just at the end, and bugger that film reel. It’s not in digital stereo, it’s sixteen millimeters, and how you deal, with all the pops and sounds of how your life is whacked.
Well enough for covers of what I thought, that tomb of Jesus still stands sought, and after all this life and dreams I have to say. G_D, would you take me with all my fears, a stranger in darkness, on ever clear, an immature old man whose old and gray. Look at these shambles I think I am, this witch of a man, whose magic can, write him a song to the master-plan of grace. For I do adore, the after lore, of shadows and play, the left hand of G_D, that Ad Finem, who takes a witch to a greater place. It surprises me some of what could be, this place of greatness, in ecstasy, why is it we think, that death is the way, our world sets in place our days. It’s something that witches adore. Ad Finem when they open that desperate door.
It waits so patient, some say so strong, it’s beauty a part of the terror of a song. A melody sung to a right minor key, sometimes hummed backwards, now those novice notes wait inward in me. Oh upwards G minor, and down to B flat, and somewhere a violin, without strings, well, there’s that. And just like at Salem, a witch that knows she’s dead, all I have to say to G_D is “I’m innocent of all that”.
A dream 05.17.2016 and you were in it! – 05.18.2016 – דָּנִיֵּאל
Holy shit this rocks.
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Ah Jeez, Ruby, the language, but thank you very much. 🙂
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Can’t help myself. 😉
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Thank you! 🙂
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She’s right, this is really really good! 🙂
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As always, thank you! 🙂
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I read this and kept thinking, please let it keep going. I loved it!
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Thank you. Happy you enjoyed it.
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A wonderful read, filled with darkness and a point of life. 🙂
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Really happy you liked this Daria Thank you. 🙂
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This was beautifully done, and filled with haunted passion.
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Thank you.
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I really liked this Daniel, it had a kind of thumping in the night appeal to it. 😉
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I am really happy you liked it Lynette. Thank you for commenting.
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The desperate plea really got to me in this, but toward the end the triumph was victorious! It gave me shivers!!! ❤
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Thanks for reading and your comment.
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I got the idea you enjoyed writing this. It was like you hit your stride. Well done!
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Thanks Wang, you read me right. 🙂
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Your welcome, I look forward to your post!
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I wonder if G_d will take this olde Crone 🙂
born into innocent, I wonder if we as once again in this human body are innocent when return to the earth
i was held captive by the flow of energy that wound within and without of your thoughts here…your song gave the perfect quiet to feel from deep within
Beautiful Daniel..as always
Take Care…You Matter
maryrose
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Thank you for your most insightful and thoughtful comment Maryrose. I doubt indeed G_D ever sees a Crone where your concerned. No , methinks the creator the light birthed you a lady and a lady you shall go! 🙂
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This is incredible stuff you have written here! The soul cries out and is answered fully!
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Thank you Dennis. I couldn’t agree more!
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Well written, and again, your cadence & rhyme are terrific!
I’m on a series right now, & working long days during 8 day weeks.
In July I will be able to visit more. Take care! 🙂
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Thank you Resa, I am always thrilled when you preview and comment on my stuff. you have such an interesting life. I will look forward to July! 🙂
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